In the Heart of the City -
We Ought to be Witty,
Because the Dark can be Pretty;
And if you Start to be Silly,
Only Part will feel Pity.
The death Darts fly swiftly...
See,
In the Heart of the City -
The Bad is the Youth.
I'll be Glad when we Sleuth,*
When Had the great Ruth.**
Yet,
It's Sad it's the Truth;
That we can't Add,
The Art of being Pretty,
In the Heart of the City.
*Sleuth - usually used when describing detectives; to observe or follow secretly.
**Ruth - sympathy for the hardships of others.
**There will be another blog with the same title; iLOVE it so much lol. this is basically saying; that in the depths of society, evil lurks - and that is the true reason why our problems cannot be solved.
-em;
We Ought to be Witty,
Because the Dark can be Pretty;
And if you Start to be Silly,
Only Part will feel Pity.
The death Darts fly swiftly...
See,
In the Heart of the City -
The Bad is the Youth.
I'll be Glad when we Sleuth,*
When Had the great Ruth.**
Yet,
It's Sad it's the Truth;
That we can't Add,
The Art of being Pretty,
In the Heart of the City.
*Sleuth - usually used when describing detectives; to observe or follow secretly.
**Ruth - sympathy for the hardships of others.
**There will be another blog with the same title; iLOVE it so much lol. this is basically saying; that in the depths of society, evil lurks - and that is the true reason why our problems cannot be solved.
-em;
4 comments:
this is my second fav. " Man Behind the Wheel " will remain first. but i love this b/c it made me really think about my life and how it still blossoms in the negative environment. thankss milesy!
so, without your explanation;
i got the message of the poem.
you probably figured
that im going to be all
"agh ! i love it"
[ because i do ]
however =/
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i reeaaaaallly think my replies
& love // admiration of your blog is becoming wayyyy obvious .
so my comment is going to be something lifeless . and lame .
like --
" oh .
cool . "
=p
...*sigh* Miles you just can't ignore rhythmic patterns can you? lmao. Your poem rhymes so much that it got boring quickly lol. PLUS the fact that you used these words that no one in our day of age uses such as sleuth...lmfao Miles wtf were you thinking when you took that from the rhyming dictionary. It made me laugh because in my mind it seems like you couldnt find anything to rhyme with youth that was in the same context of the poem so you used some abnormal ass word such as ruth lmao. Sleuth and Ruth...Miles wtf lmao.
I think it could have been much better if you would have toned down the rhyming and the sleuth and ruth. lmfao. imma be laughing all night. Sleuth...lmao.
ouch.
_iguess icould do without those lines; but damn !
...iknew those words prior to making this poem lol.
But as I am typing this I am starting to agree with you; ONLY with doing without those lines.
I think that the rhyming in this is Fine; I don't rhyme often anyways, .
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