Sunday, September 13, 2009

A Few Words...Heart of the City.




So thanks to Dave, I realized how much I don't like my newest poem, "Heart of the City."
---I will keep it up, for I won't delete or completly change something due to another's words. [Especially since there was something about it which made me post it in the first place.]
However, there will be another one which will be, I feel, much better.
=]


"Is it really that hard to listen to the thoughts of another?"

-em;

1 comments:

D3 said...

...sry bud. just expressing an opinion. do your thing. the idea is good, but a few things were executed poorly.