Saturday, August 15, 2009

Untitled.*

I was once like you, sinister as can be:
Killed people for the joy, and the thrilling glee.
No mercy, no purpose for a plea.**
Death to one, is all you can guarantee.

But don't blink twice, I'll appear within the mist.
If you hear me coming, don't bother to resist.
I hold no heart, remorse does not exist.
I'll thrust 'til the last breath, if you insist.

Your blood's intoxicating, I'll wear it as a cloak;
Whisper in your son's ear, the last words you spoke.
End your wretched life, for the malice you provoke.
An amazing inferno, your lungs'll be roaring with smoke.

Ashes will remain, souls will not.
Another beautiful cleansing, another successful plot.
Your wrongdoings will forever live; it's sad I suppose,
That it will all end, because of the path you chose.




*Couldn't think of a title with which I am satisfied-I will eventually.
**You know how people plea for their lives to be spared when they are[knowingly]about to be killed? yeah .

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5 comments:

Saika Bince said...

First iThought yu were a vampire .
Then iDecided yu had to be the Grim Reeper .

Who are yu in this poem ?

Her*Essence said...

deepness. i kind of thought someone was begging for there lives at the third verse! i lovee ! it was unexpected and even more reason for me to like it.

M i l e s. said...

Saika,
I play the role of a murderer, who was once vicious and killed for the sheer joy of watching other perish. However, I am now "reformed" and only kill those who are murderers.

Pap ! said...

this was interesting for me to read. i've always thought about whether i would kill "for the sheer joy of watching other[s] perish" if it were allowed, "it" being murder. i seem to find ppl in pain amusing, maybe watching ppl die would be evn more hilarious. wow--i just read what i typed & it sounds weird. i thought about backspacing, but ehhh lol. & why did you decide to change your sinister ways?

Ghana said...

This is by far my favorite poem; the part about whispering the last words you ever spoke into your son's ear is bloody brilliant. IDK... I dont see your malicious side. I like.

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